Wow, this is really good, Mist! I love the markings on both of the cats, but I always thought Longtail was a cream cat? Maybe I was wrong, I don't remember Mouse dying, either. The tree fell on her, right? Anyway, I do agree with Gorse about Mouse being a little on the small side, but if I'm right about the tree thing, I think her body would be a bit crushed and crippled. I like the shading, as well as the trees in the background, which I always seem to forget. Anyway, you did a fantastic job, I love it!
ok first of all, YOUR FUCKING WICKED AT DRAWING... moving onwards... i love the markings on both cats and both the poses. many say that longtail is cream but i think that is because of the warriorcats clips on youtube,(i think he is cream on the clips) i love the shadowing you have done and it realy looks goooood . i loved watching you draw this on joinme because the way you built up the charicter in both of them is fantastic! keep up the good work because your great at what you do!!! and im just saying this because i need 7 more words LOOL